Saturday, August 26, 2006

Puisi Merdeka









Semalam saya keluar pergi makan,
Lepas makan tak pergi jalan-jalan,
Balik rumah terus dapat kejutan,
Ini Angel bagi tag tanpa amaran.

Beberapa hari lagi kita sambut kemerdekaan,
Dah 49 tahun Malaysia capai kebebasan,
Sudahkah anda kibarkan jalur kegemilangan,
Kalau belum cepat-cepat kibarkan.

Kebanyakan rakyat Malaysia setiap pagi,
Makan nasi lemak sebagai sarapan pagi,
Kalau tak roti canai pun jadi,
Bagaimanalah kolesterol tak meningkat tinggi.

Segelintir orang pula makan roti,
Makan bersama telur rebus dua biji,
Dan tak lupa kaw kaw punya kopi,
Itulah sarapan rakyat Malaysia sejati.

Susah sungguh nak tulis pantun ini,
Tak ingat sudah garu kepala berapa kali,
Garu sampai rambut pun berdiri,
Saya rasa di sinilah saya berhenti.

Sebelum saya terlupa pula,
Hari ini Hari Jadi kakak saya,
Semoga dia gembira sentiasa,
Maaflah saya tak dapat temankan bersama.

Tapi sebelum saya mengundur diri,
Izinkan saya tag Butt yang bijak bestari,
Dan juga Pink Cotton yang amat disayangi,
Tak lupa juga Red Sponge yang comel sekali.

34 comments:

angel said...

doktor memang bijak bestari
cakap tak tau tulis akan tetapi
tulis begitu panjang sekali
terima kasih daun keladi!

mistipurple said...

CHUPP ahhh!! i balek kampong then read. now got to work!

Selba said...

Hehehe.. lucu juga yah baca pantun ala malay... rada2 aneh deh, tapi keren kok :) Emang kayaknya sih gaya jaman dahulu kala, serasa masih di masa2 kerajaan dulu.

Selamat ulang tahun untuk kakaknya, semoga panjang umur dan sehat selalu yah... :)

ah nel said...

pikir nasi lemak ini hari,
tengok roti canai sakit hati,
gaji tarak naik tahun ini,
doktor bolih blanja guakah,ini pagi...

Pink Cotton said...

OH MY GODDDDDD!

the tag is to write a puisi?????

die die die !

CHEN AH! COME! u die together with me...oops 'x'

Chen said...

angel,
Ini angel pandai berpuisi,
Komen diberi dalam bentuk puisi,
Jadi saya perlu ikut langkah sekali,
Kalau tidak, mana boleh jadi.

Saya memang tak reti tulis puisi,
Ini kali pertama saya tulis puisi,
Mana tau lepas saya mula berpuisi,
Inspirasi datang tak berhenti-henti

mistipurple,
no problem :)
I reserve a seat and mocha for you here :)

Selba,
Aiks, I have to scratch my head reading the Bahasa Indonesia :P
I guess I can get the rough meanings (but I dunno what is rada2 aneh deh, tapi keren kok :P )

Thanks for the bd wishes :)

Chen said...

ah nel,
jangan makan banyak sangak nasi lemak,
roti canai juga tak elok,
nanti kolesterol naik mendadak,
makanlah oatmeal makanan yang baik.

pink cotton,
walao.. ask me to die with u?
not difficult leh..
earlier on I tot difficult also..
but once u start, u will get the "feel" liao.. and u can't stop...
muahhahahha :P

ah nel said...

lama sudah gua tak makan nasi lemak,
roti canai pun sama tarak,
ini dua barang bikin gua muntah teruk,
memang oatmeal pilihan pertama...

cooknengr said...

Apa Atas Doktor, Saya pun mauk blok...ah...guna Bahasa Malaysia

Winn said...

hehehee..memang boleh juga ohhhh!!!

Chen said...

ah nel,
hahahah, enjoy the oatmeal then :)
I like oatmeal :)

cooknengr,
I'm so amused by the "What's up" become "Apa Atas" :D I will write another post again in Malay language on 31/8/2006 :D Mari, mari :)

winn,
Saya cakap-cakap kosong kat sini aje :P

a^ben said...

walau eh u doc!!!!! write so long for what !! give me tension only!!!

ah nel said...

just had it...lol...now so full...

may said...

thank goodness I'm not tagged, my BM sucks... and I wouldn't have done it anyway, hehe!

Chen said...

ben,
planned to write short-short one at first.. but mana tau.. lepas mula tulis, tak boleh berhenti pulak :P

u also mah.. write long long..
sampai berbuih-buih and berketar-ketar macam lipas :D

ah nel,
have it for breakfast everyday :)

may,
kakkaa.. i know in advance mah :P
I guess our BM all dua kali lima.

azuna said...

Hai..nice blog, I like it....keep up your good work espacialy poem tu..

AceOne said...

wuahh!! Loctor pandai buat pantun ler.
Me 'kaw tou' sama lu ler.

Baik mia pantun!! clap..clap..clap..hands.

_butt said...

doktor tulis manyak cun punya pantun!! ^^

tibalah masanya saya menggaru kepala berpantun.. nak nangis dah.. 4 hari dekat deadline.. habis lah..

ah nel said...

i had it for breakfast n lunch... ;)

Cynthia said...

fulamak! pesta pantun kah?

you orang banyak pandai.. ekekek

mistipurple said...

sits here wait for pink cotton and sengkor show to start.
eh, i wrong theatre seat is it huh?

Chen said...

azuna,
Thanks :)

aceone,
first time tulis, cincai tulis sahaja. paiseh paiseh :P

butt,
janganlah menangis, wahai adik Butt yang disayangi :) Adik ada dekat 100 jam lagi. Banyak masa lagi :)

ah nel,
include it as dinner as well ;)

cynthia,
Betul, sekarang waktu berpantun :)
Maklumlah beberapa hari lagi, Malaysia akan merayakan Hari Kebangsaan yang ke-49.

mistipurple,
Kakkaa, u are at the wrong theatre seat leh.. :P Kissing show is next door :D

mistipurple said...

kakaaka, next door no admittance. got tiger show! wakkakakaa!
ah yo you loctor jialat got so many x-ray show going on at your premise. :P

*leaves strawbelly cheesecake in your fridge*

Chen said...

mistipurple,
wah.. sini tarak tiger show lah..
sini Malaysia, bukan Thailand kkekee..

u wanna see skull XRay or Chest Xray or Pelvix Xray or Thoracolumbar Xray?
This is the "real" Xray show... don't play-play. Hahahhaa..

Thanks for the cheese cake :D

mistipurple said...

*faints*
then ownself take smelling salts to wake up and continue see skull x-ray..

Chen said...

misti,
Xray show is better than xrated show, right? :P

_butt said...

dah siap, doktor! yay!! minta doktor semak-semak sikit bila senang nanti ya.. selamat malam!! ^^

Chen said...

butt,
Butt memang bijak bestari
cepatnya dia menyiapkan puisi
terima kasih kerana menyertai
kita berpuisi lagi kemudian hari

mistipurple said...

ah yo this lokun boh koon wan. *chase chen to bed*

Chen said...

mistipurple,
hahahha.. yesterday night kena "halau" by Misti.. so no choice but go to bed prematurely :P

miracle8 said...

kowtow kowtow... your BM memang terror sekali. :D

Chen said...

miracle8,
hahhaa, paiseh paiseh..
I return a "huge" portion of my BM back to my BM teacher liao, luckily not 100% yet :P

Cocka Doodle said...

Very terror wor your pantun.
*clap clap clap*

Chen said...

cocka,
kekekee...u r terror as well :P
I just realised everyone can write pantun/puisi/poem.. hahhahaa...
the hidden talent inside everyone of us
LOL